Saturday, April 4, 2009

For and against essay

Mobile or not?
While some teenagers use the mobile when they are twelve or thirteen years old,in my opinion,the mobile is a mean of communication with the parents so they can control them.

On the one hand, the mobiles have got some innapropiates,which are,for example,there are too expensive mobiles;also when the children,who are twelve or thirteen years old,are irresponsible and they lose the mobile.
On the other hand,this problems can solve if the parents buy cheaper mobiles to them,and the children will learn to look after the things too.
Although the parents don´t buy a supermobile to their son,the parents will be calm,because they can comunicate with their children when they want to do it.
Also,the chidren will learn the responsibility,because their parents will scold them for the money that they have spent phoning.
In conclusion,a lot of people don´t think the same way than me,but personally,I think the teenagers need a mobile because they always have got some problems,but if they have a mobile phone,they will be able to solve a lot of their problems.

1 comment:

  1. WELL DONE LETICIA! WHAT KIND OF MOBILE PHONE DO YOU HAVE? A SUPERMOBILE OR JUST A NORMAL PHONE? :)

    Mobile or not?
    While some teenagers use (the) mobile PHONES when they are twelve or thirteen years old TO TALK WITH FRIENDS ,in my opinion, (the) mobile PHONES SHOULD BE (is) a meanS of communication with theIR parents so they can (control) CHECK ON them.

    On the one hand, (the) mobile(s) PHONES have got some (innapropiates) DISADVANTAGES. (,which are,) For example, there are SOME VERY (too) expensive mobile(s) PHONES. Also when (the) children, who are twelve or thirteen years old, are irresponsible, (and) they lose theIR PHONES (mobile).
    On the other hand, thEsE problems can BE solveD if (the) parents buy cheaper mobiles (to) FOR them, and the children (will) learn to look after theIR things too.
    Although the parents don´t buy a supermobile (to) FOR their son OR DAUGHTER, the parents will be calm because they can comunicate with their children when they want to (do it).
    Also,the chidren will learn (the responsibility) TO BE RESPONSIBLE because their parents will scold them for the money that they have spent phoning.
    In conclusion,a lot of people don´t think the same way (than) AS me, but personally, I think (the) teenagers need a mobile PHONE because they always have got some problems but THAT if they have a mobile phone, they will be able to solve a lot of their problems.

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