Monday, February 16, 2009

My newspaper article

A incredible story

A thief of England kidnapped a woman. He kidnapped hers, because the woman had got a picture in her purse. The picture was worth $1000.000.000.But...what will the thief do with the picture? The police are investigating, but they think the thief wants do an exhibition with the picture therefore he ´ll gain money.

The police has found the woman. She has told that the picture had painted it and it was her first masterpiece. The police have discovered the thief was the woman´s boyfriend. The both wanted sold the picture and to gain the money that the police give them as a result of the theft. Finally they were in the jail and when they left, they mounted a business of art.


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  1. AN incredible story

    A thief (of) FROM England kidnapped a woman. He kidnapped (hers)HER because the woman had (got) a picture in her purse. The picture was worth $1000.000.000. But...what will the thief do with the picture? The police are investigating, but they think the thief wants do an exhibition with the picture. Therefore he ´ll (gain) MAKE money.

    The police haVE found the woman. She (has told that) EXPLAINED THAT SHE (the picture) had painted it and it was her first masterpiece. The police have discovered the thief was the woman´s boyfriend. TheY both wanted (sold)TO SELL the picture and (to gain the) MAKE money FROM THE INSURANCE COMPANY (that the police give them) as a result of the theft. (Finally)IN THE END they were SENT TO (in the) jail and when they left, they (mounted)STARTED aN ART GALLERY (business of art).

    GOOD WORK LETICIA! I ADDED THE BIT ABOUT THE INSURANCE BECAUSE I DON'T THINK THE POLICE WOULD GIVE SOMEONE MONEY IF THEY WERE ROBBED.

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